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FIC: Missing Scene from The Last Dragonlord

This show is the first thing to inspire me to write in ages, so forgive me if I'm a little rusty. Also, I'm American, so please forgive any British inconsistancies.


Title: Missing Scene from The Last Dragonlord (Yeah, I suck at titles.)
Author: Roxane
Rating: G, maybe a slight PG
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Gwen, Merlin, Gaius
Spoilers: For The Last Dragonlord
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Not a thing. Sadly.




Summary: I was disappointed we didn't get to see a "Gwen and Arthur say goodbye before he faces the dragon" scene. So here's my humble attempt. Hope you like!



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Arthur swallowed the lump of fierce pride in his throat.


"We ride in one hour's time. Go now," he said as he turned in a slow circle, meeting the eyes of each and every one of the brave knights surrounding him. "Say your goodbyes," he added quietly.


The knights dispersed and Arthur crossed to join Merlin who stood waiting near the chamber door. "I'll need my armor."


"Of course, sire."


They turned as one and walked in silence towards Arthur's chambers. Halfway up the main stairs, Arthur came to an abrupt halt. Merlin sent him an inquiring look. "Arthur?"


Arthur met his eyes. "I have my own goodbyes to say."


Merlin nodded. "I'll prepare your armor."


Arthur hurried to the large chamber set aside for those wounded by the Great Dragon's attacks and swept the room with a searching look. Disappointment surged through him. She was not there.


"Sire?"


Arthur turned to find Gaius standing behind him. "Gaius. Where - that is, how is everyone?"


"I believe we won't lose any more, my lord."


Arthur nodded. "Excellent."


Gaius considered Arthur for a moment before adding, "I am very lucky to have Guinevere to help me."


"Good. Good." Arthur glanced around the room again.


"She has worked tirelessly to help these people." Gaius gave him a small smile. "I sent her home to rest, my lord."


Arthur met the physician's eyes, seeing in them knowledge and acceptance. "Thank you, Gaius."


Gaius bowed his head without another word, and Arthur turned and ran out of the castle. Knowing he would only have a few precious minutes, he raced across the courtyard, ignoring the curious looks of the guards and townspeople, not slowing until he came to her house. He paused before her door and took a deep breath before rapping twice. The seconds he waited seemed an eternity, but then the door opened and she was there, weariness replaced by surprise on her face.


"Arthur!" A brilliant smile lit her face. "You've returned." She added a belated, "My lord."


"May I come in?" he asked.


Her smile faded at his solemn tone. "Of course, sire," she said, stepping aside and widening the door.


Arthur stepped through and walked to the center of the room, turning to watch as she closed the door, drinking in every detail of her he could, the slightly rumpled curl of her hair, the soft curve of her cheek, the warm, puzzled brown of her eyes.


Gwen smooth her skirts as she walked to stand before him. "Arthur? What is it?" Worry crept into her voice.


"The dragonlord was killed on the way here."


Sorrow filled her face. "Oh, no."


"My knights and I ride to face the dragon beyond the castle walls in one hour."


Stunned, she shook her head. "But...That's suicide."


"It is unlikely we will return," he agreed.


Tears welled in her eyes. "But..."


He clasped his hands behind his back, squaring his shoulders and raising his eyes to a point slightly above her head, unable to bear the pain he was causing her. "I will make arrangements with Gaius for you to continue to have a position with him. He'll have you moved into the castle. You will be safer there. And you'll want for nothing."


"Don't talk like that," she said, stepping closer to him. When he continued to look away from her, she placed one hand lightly on his chest and waited until he lowered his eyes to hers. "You will find a way to defeat this dragon. You always find a way."


He looked from the determination in her eyes to the small hand against his chest. She moved to snatch her hand away and he caught it in both of his, holding it firmly against his heart, smiling at the chagrin evident on her face.


"You really do have quite a lot of faith in me, don't you?"


She pressed her lips together and gave him a succinct nod. "Yes, I do."


He raised her hand, bowing his head to brush a soft kiss across the backs of her fingers. "Then I shall do all in my power to make myself worthy of that faith."


He lowered her hand but kept it clasped in his, needing to feel her for those last few moments. Unspeaking, they stared at each other, until he squeezed her hand gently one last time and released it.


"I must go."


He turned and had one hand on the door when she called his name. He stayed with his back, not sure he could bear it if she asked him to stay, and she slid between his body and the door. Her hands cupped his face and then her lips were on his in a desperate kiss. He had barely managed to wrap his arms around her trembling body before she ripped her mouth from his and pressed closer to him, wrapping her arms around his neck. He hugged her tight, burying his face in her neck, taking in the warm, clean smell of her hair, memorizing every detail of the soft, womanly feel of her.


"Come back to me," she said, a fiercely whispered command in his ear.


He nodded against her neck and she pulled back from him, staring up at him with steely resolve. She lowered her arms and stepped several feet away from him. He looked at her one last time, standing there in the sunlight shining through the window, her hands clasped before her, back straight, no hint of fear anywhere about her. He thought his heart might burst with the love he felt for this woman, so brave and strong. A woman who would make an amazing queen.


He bowed his head to her and walked out the door.



The End


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Tags: fanwork: fic, genre: romance, pairing: arthur/guinevere

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[info]hmsharmony

February 1 2010, 02:36:01 UTC 2 years ago

Aw, this was terrific!! You had nothing to worry about - your writing was excellent and your characterization spot on. Thank you for this terrific contribution!! If only they had scene like this in the finale.

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 03:46:53 UTC 2 years ago

Thank you so much! I couldn't believe we didn't get to see Gwen's reaction to Arthur going to what should have been his death. Even as they were riding off, we only saw Gauis watching them. Thanks for the feeback!

[info]roothey

February 1 2010, 03:39:57 UTC 2 years ago

You know what was really cool about this?
The fact that your dialogue could fit seamlessly into the actual show.

I can easily imagine the characters saying those lines. It's like you kept the style of the show writers but managed to avoid some of their pitfalls...ahem...

Anyways, I really liked it!

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 03:48:44 UTC 2 years ago

That's completely the best thing you could have said to me. If if sometimes I have charactes doing things they can't or won't have them do on the show, I like to keep them in character as much as possible. so thank you very much!

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[info]cifan70

February 1 2010, 03:49:59 UTC 2 years ago

This was wonderful. Very sweet. I love missing scenes.

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 03:55:13 UTC 2 years ago

Thank you! Missing scenes - what got me started writing fic a long time ago. If the writers don't give it to me, I have to do it myself.

[info]mag2425

February 1 2010, 04:09:29 UTC 2 years ago

This was wonderful. This missing scene would have fit so perfectly into the Last Dragonlord. Hope that you will write more!!

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 04:19:28 UTC 2 years ago

Thank you! I hope to write more. I just tend to be a little slow. But since we have soooooo long to wait, it could happen.

[info]javabreeze

February 1 2010, 04:40:30 UTC 2 years ago

I thought that was particularly lovely! Well done.

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 04:48:33 UTC 2 years ago

Thank you so much!

[info]imigination

February 1 2010, 05:28:06 UTC 2 years ago

Really, really lovely. ♥

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 05:43:28 UTC 2 years ago

This comm is great. thanks bunches!

[info]jyellow13

February 1 2010, 07:34:53 UTC 2 years ago

I'm glad you were inspired to write. This was a lovely little fic and it really comes across how much Gwen and Arthur meant to each other. I also liked how you seamlessly worked in Gaius as a supporter of A/G into this as well.

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 14:24:03 UTC 2 years ago

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

[info]littleweasel1

February 1 2010, 07:48:31 UTC 2 years ago

Wow! If this is you being rusty then....!!! Absolutely convincing, I could hear Bradley and Angel speaking your dialogue and the whole scene rang true to the show. I LOVE missing scenes and this particular one is SOOOO needed! Thanks for sharing....can't WAIT for more fics from you! xxx

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 14:27:14 UTC 2 years ago

You know what's funny? Dialogue is my thing in writing - it tends to be what I'm good at. But these two, when things are intense, do a lot of gazing at each other without a lot of talking, and I was thinking I wouldn't be able to pull them off. I'm glad it worked. Thanks!

[info]robinmarian

February 1 2010, 09:51:13 UTC 2 years ago Edited:  February 1 2010, 09:52:30 UTC

WOW! Just WOW! OMG! I need a moment to collect myself here... oh wow! This was soooo beautiful. THIS scene totally happened ok? lol Wow!

Thank you for a lovely fic. I hope you can write more AG fics because you are awesome.

I loved this from start to end. Esp the end. Esp this bit:

He thought his heart might burst with the love he felt for this woman, so brave and strong. A woman who would make an amazing queen.

SO MUCH LOVE!

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 14:30:43 UTC 2 years ago

Thank you! I think I'm blushing now.

[info]frenchy_jess

February 1 2010, 13:21:05 UTC 2 years ago

OH MY!!!
Why are missing scenes always missing!!!!!! I was so disappointed as well not having this kind of scene so thanks a ot for this! It was perfect & lovely ♥

A woman who would make an amazing queen.

I so can't wait for this!! ;)

[info]roxane66

February 1 2010, 14:32:10 UTC 2 years ago

as far as I'm concerned, they need an A/G goodbye scene every time he goes off to face death, which would be like, every episode! I'd be fine with that. LOL Thanks for the feedback!

[info]foot_tapper1

February 1 2010, 15:33:11 UTC 2 years ago

Well I'm English and I thought your voices were great - well done :)

Loved this scene. I was very disappointed that they didn't show Arthur saying goodbye to Gwen before they left to fight the dragon so I love fanfics like this that fill the gap!

[info]roxane66

February 2 2010, 02:32:50 UTC 2 years ago

Thanks so much. I'm glad I didn't make any horrible "accent" errors. LOL

[info]starry_laa

February 1 2010, 18:57:26 UTC 2 years ago

That was a lovely missing scene, I wish they had it in the show.

[info]roxane66

February 2 2010, 02:35:22 UTC 2 years ago

It was not at all right they didn't give us an A/G goodbye scene. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

[info]dame_margaret

February 2 2010, 01:25:45 UTC 2 years ago

A wonderful missing scene. You know, Arthur and Gwen have not said "I love you" to each other yet, but your writing said it for them. Great job!

[info]roxane66

February 2 2010, 02:36:31 UTC 2 years ago

It seems the closest they came was Arthur saying, "I've never loved another." But it's all there - I was just following along. I'm glad you liked it. Thanky you!

[info]define_serenity

February 2 2010, 09:17:50 UTC 2 years ago

aww so beautiful!
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